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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
I write these words from the heart Not knowing how i feel Will this be the poem of truth? Will i finally know whats real? If i look at your face today I wont be able to turn away But i hate the thought of my life gone cold Because each day im growing old And without you in my life im dead Each day your gone i truly dread I think about you all the time And your bodys always on my mind You gave me peace and sweet serenity I'll try to love you for all eternity The seasons change As does my mind I hate you now But put the past behind I cannot live with these numbing thoughts I'll try to make all of this forgot One day i will be able to say I thought i loved you But in a lost confusing way I'll be there for you whenever you need Even if it makes my heart bleed I'll give you my thoughts I'll share with you my dreams But for now my hurting angel Being apart is how it seems Be gone for good, Come back to me I hate you now Will you still love me? Smile at the pretty sun And think of me each time you cry For everytime a tear is shed Theres one falling off my pretty head Be true, and pure Redeem yourself Then we'll be together. |
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Missthang Member
since 2001-07-03
Posts 103 |
The words of this poem were really well. But, I thought it was a little choppy for some reason it didn't read very "flowing" to me. But then again that's only my opinion. You captured your thoughts very well and did a good job to telling the reader exactly how you feel. nice. "Whatever you are doing, love yourslef for doing it. |
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