Teen Poetry #7 |
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I miss you |
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saddest girl New Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 4living in your letters |
i miss those phone calls that lasted all night and those times when we didnt talk but just listened to the sound of you guitar i miss the times when youd hold me close to you when nothing else mattered i miss looking into you deep blue eyes not thinking about anything but you and me us together as one seperated into two worlds apart now saddness has consumed me i try to stay strong and not give in but its just an act i pretend it doesnt bother me and that i dont care but deep inside its killing me i care someday ill find someone new but ill never fully open up the way i did with you i hope you miss me too |
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Finalinsomnia New Member
since 2003-10-07
Posts 8Washington, USA |
A touching piece... I can't really relate to the emotion within it but I really liked it. Lots of passion and heart behind it. Keep writing. |
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Barbara Junior Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 32 |
oh... I know how you feel.. I feel the same way, just that Im very angry beside that lost and sad feeling ![]() Everything will be okay ![]() |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
im there with you on this one. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Wow...I agree with everyone else. Good job. "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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Silent Evincar Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 179Here There and Places Between |
Always the end comes to the tune of "I'll find someone else but never like you" idea. My question is: how will there ever been anyone else after that?? Blue eyes, phone calls, guitars, and nights in each others arms.... not easy to replace. Smile saddest girl this was very nice. NJS |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I like the message you're conveying. And I can definitely relate. Especially with the last few lines. Nice work. *I figured out that trust was just my one mistake...* |
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saddest girl New Member
since 2003-10-12
Posts 4living in your letters |
thanks everyone ![]() |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
Awww. It's gonna be okay. Stay strong honey. *nice job* ![]() ~*~Hope restores broken wings; faith helps us fly.~*~ |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, I know this is kind of late, but I wanted to welcome you to Passions In Poetry. This is a very good first post, with lots of emotion written in it. I hope that you enjoy it here at PIP. Please check your e-mail for a special greetings from all of us at Passions. ![]() Ethel/garysgirl Moderator/Passions In Poetry |
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Toasty Member
since 2003-06-09
Posts 74my little hole in wisconsin |
powerful, emotional- a wonderful poem. I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your stuff. Keep up the excellent work. ~toasty "Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales. |
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