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Teen Poetry #7

broken heart

Lindsay
Member

since 2003-03-26

Posts 59
South Dakota

0 posted 2004-02-12 11:00 PM

You broke my heart yes it’s true
I really was in love with you

But I guess it wasn’t mean to be
And now there is no you and me

Our relationship ended just as suddenly as it started
For without warning you departed

You left me here all alone
My heart is stranded without a home

I suppose in time I will get over you
Eventually I will stop feeling blue

One day I will get you out of my mind
Because someone else I will find

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2004-02-13 03:19 AM

*hugs*

Horses are my life
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

Ixxi
Member

since 2004-01-02

Posts 77
England

2 posted 2004-02-13 10:03 AM

Looks like you tried a little too hard to make this rhyme. Still, quite good.

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2004-02-13 01:40 PM

ya forced rhyming kills all

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2004-02-13 04:06 PM

Look towards the future, hun, and try not to look back on the past. nicely said!

~sky

Hold on, if you feel like letting go
Hold on, it gets better than you know....
~Good Charlotte

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-02-14 03:28 PM

As the saying goes, "to-morrow is another day." Very nice write. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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