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Olive_8
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 41
Canada

0 posted 2003-09-22 06:59 PM

There comes a time in each ones life
When things just fall apart
Like nothing seems to go their way
But baby not no more

I made the mistake of trusting you
And making you my world
I made the mistake of loving you
And thinking that I was your girl

All that precious time I can't get back
I seemed to have wasted on you
There is nothing that I can do right now
If only I would have knew

Why did we let things get like this
Too far now beyond repair
I can't let things be like this
I can't pretend that I don't care

There may be times I don' t think of you
Maybe for days and days on end
But the moment you come back to mind
I mainly miss you as a friend

I know that things didn't work for us
And our relationship took a fall
I'd rather have you as my friend
Than have you as nothing at all

[This message has been edited by Olive_8 (09-22-2003 11:08 PM).]

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

1 posted 2003-09-22 10:26 PM

nice... I could really relate to this.

Keep up the good work!

~toasty

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

sunshinemc
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 27

2 posted 2003-09-22 10:35 PM

Wow, i really like this one. Very nicely done. I can relate to this completely. It does hurt very much but theres always sunshine to follow
<3

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

3 posted 2003-09-23 02:02 AM

This reminded me of the first real talk I had with my first love a few months after we had broken up, we haden't spoken in a while and I told him that I missed him and I wanted his friendship back, he agreed. Thank you for this piece and bringing back such a memory in such a lovely way. Beautifully done
~Live and Laugh~

The problem with resisting temptation is you never know if you'll get the chance again
~Bella~

lauren03
Member

since 2002-01-04

Posts 64
oh, usa

4 posted 2003-09-23 11:49 AM

oh that was a sad one, tear......... i know how it feels, i'm going through the same thing and i miss the person soooo much. good write.
lauren

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

5 posted 2003-09-23 07:34 PM

This was a sad poem and it reminded me of a song im forever singing in my head...

-ash

I wear my crown of thorns
on my liar's chair
full of broken thoughts
I cannot repair

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

6 posted 2003-09-27 06:20 AM

very nice but even though sometimes it doesnt work out as friends try to keep it real..... nice writing.... keep it up

paraboxer
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 121
Maryland, USA

7 posted 2003-09-27 06:28 AM

Excellent work. I've been going through a similar situation myself. I'm only hoping the friendship stays intact. That poem spoke directly to my heart. Thanks.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

8 posted 2003-10-17 05:33 PM

yeah, if only right? good write.

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