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What You Are
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What You Are |
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pammy Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 50California |
This is what you are, and what you'll alwyas be. I'm so sure we will never part, No one will love youmore than me. "What am I to you?" you ask, Well I shall tell you. When you're around I can throw away the mask, When we're together, anything we can do. You're always here when you are needed, You're always wlling to help. Our love is strung like a necklace that was beaded, and worn forever, never to break. Thank you now and always, You are the best there could be. Without you, I would wander the empty hallways, You have definately saved me. Now I will tell you what you are. You are my friend and thats not all, You are a beautiful person and you raise the bar, I wanna be lke you( but maybe not that tall  |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Aww.. that was so sweee..t!  I can relate, i have a friend who is like that, and i like him, a lot. He's tall too! kissa **~kissa~** |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I liked this one alot. Had some nice metaphors like "Without you, I would wander the empty hallways," Some dude doesn't know how lucky he was. Peace "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
I liked it a lot, nice wirte!! hope to see more ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I like this! ~Alli~ Happy Holidays! |
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