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Teen Poetry #7

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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2004-02-02 09:31 PM

Homesick
In my own room
Homesick in my own skin
Watch me jump when the walls whisper my name.
Everything about this place is mockery.
I wish I could go in and fiddle with their brains, like they've meddled in mine.
Turn a switch.
Turn off the ice cold spark in their eyes.
Poke wholes in my heart, why don't you?
A casual word in the air,
a casual toss of the hair.
And I'm pummeled to the ground,
concrete inbetween my teeth.
I'm homesick again.
Grabing hold of my stomach,
squeezing it dry of blood, dry of feeling.
This is home.
This is my truth.
Face it with dry eyes,
or face it with reproof.

" If you never stop when you wave goodbye, you just might find if you give it time you will wave hello again."

[This message has been edited by Lexy (02-02-2004 10:53 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-14 07:36 PM

interesting

figured I'd bump this one back up since it never got any replies

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-03-14 10:54 PM

Very good write, I think I like the last 2 lines best.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-03-17 07:14 PM

kool. I like this one a lot. I can feel it. Awesome write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

4 posted 2004-03-19 04:14 PM

owwch chica...there is definatly a lot of agony in this. =(. yet it was expressed very well. i liked.

- River

sleep my precious slumber

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