»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #7
»
missing chance
| Teen Poetry #7 |
|
missing chance |
|
Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
|
i've been writing songs for a little while now and this is the first song i have posted on here....see what cha think verse one someday i won't remember your name nothing will be the same when i finally let you go and i just wanted you to know chorus baby i love you but you don't see me i always knew sometime you would need me but the times come to late you've missed your chance now its my turn to run around and dance verse 2 i'll listen to songs and drown my tears deny that i told you my reckless fears i'm tired of playing these stupid games but everytime i close my eyes i see you saying my name Pre Chorus and i'm watching the lips i never kissed and the boy i never had a chance with End and one day i'll surface and it will all be worth it (chorus) *truth be told, you could slit my throat, and with my last breath, i would apologize for bleeding on your shirt |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I absolutely love this!! When is it being released??!! Seriously, I could hear it being sung, it was just so right. Thanks for sharing, my heart sang in raw empathy. ~Liz~ "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
||
|
Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
ESP: i am so glad you liked it that much. as i said...i have only been writing songs for a short time and i am only 14 1/2 years old, but someday....someday i'll be out there...singing...hopefully... always- riley *truth be told, you could slit my throat, and with my last breath, i would apologize for bleeding on your shirt |
||
|
SweetStephanie Junior Member
since 2003-12-29
Posts 18Alabama, |
love it it's great keep up the good work and let me know of any new posts pls!!! |
||
|
Snickers123 Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 94United States-Iowa |
I loved it, GREAT write, hope to read more!! ~*.:Leah:.*~ |
||
|
kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I loved this. I could hear it as a song in my head.... I can realy relate also. I feel that way about a freind of myne, that i liked for a while...we sort of have this connection, if that makes any sense...and then he turned around and went out with my best freinds, and that is when i decided to let it go...to let him go. Now, he likes me, and i refuse to go out with him...he hurt me way too bad for that. Awesome song...and amazing poem. Karissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
