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So I am Told
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So I am Told |
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RedDiamond1307 Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 20 |
I'm a 18 year-old girl with curly hair, glittering and funny, who feels lonely sometimes. I do not ask to be understood because I can't even understand myslef. I ask to be accepted, I ask to be accepted as I am. I do not want to be told what potential I have, or what my future holds. I do not want to be told that I'm going no where in life because I skipped school. I question my existence, my meaning. I question what the "real world" is, and why I'm not there. I feel happy with new shoes on. I feel lonesome in a small room. Sometimes my heart bleeds and I cry, Laughter echoes is my mind. I am told to be different, to be myself. But then I am told what to wear and how to ach. I like to draw and rumors hurt. I know how to dance, but sometimes I sit anyway. Please don't try to understand me, nor judge me too quickly. My name doesn't matter, my heart is open. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I liked this, i usually dont go for free verse , but i really like this one. Keep it up chica! lol If you want to that is! lol, I am just playing. I hope to hear more! ~kissa~ **~kissa~** |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
it was an ok poem wasnt to impressed but it made a point and by the way did you get this line I know how to dance, but sometimes I sit anyway. from a lean womack song i hope you dance i think thats how you spell it but other than that ok write A person will sometimes devote all his life to the development of one part of his body - the wishbone |
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