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BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

0 posted 2004-01-25 01:50 PM

The way that your eyes look deep into me
With a passion so strong I can taste it
Is a feeling that I savor with every breath
I'm so addicted to your love

It is like a drug that I can't give up
It's something that keeps me going
Throughout the days and into the nights
I can't let this feeling go

Your touch leaves me in a silent bliss
No words can explain what is on my mind
The way that your soft fingertips caress my figure
It's something that will remain with me forever

It's a little bit of danger mixed with need
That makes it so meaningful
It leaves me floating on top of the clouds
I just can't get you out of my thoughts

I'm addicted to your touch
I'm addicted to your love
I'm addicted to your very being
And I can't be without you

I never meant to fall this hard
But there's just something about you
That sets my heart on fire
With the yearning to be in your arms

I know that it is wrong
I know that it shouldn't be like this
But I know that I love you
I know that I need you

And I know that you love me too*

*¤§¤*You are born helpless...and you die helpless...*¤§¤*

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2004-01-25 02:23 PM

strong and deep,,,well written,,,,,I too, am addicted to my true love as well
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-01-26 02:36 PM

your metaphors are insane!!!! its sooooo deep

now im alone, but not lonely like before

Olive_8
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 41
Canada

3 posted 2004-01-27 02:34 PM

It was one of the best poems that i have ever read, well done!

**There is no such thing as a promise!!**

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

4 posted 2004-01-27 07:20 PM

Thank you SO much for your comments guys! It's very much appreciated!

~J.Lynn

*¤§¤*You are born helpless...and you die helpless...*¤§¤*

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