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Teen Poetry #7

We Three Kings

colifer
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 37
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-02 10:36 PM

We Three Kings declare
life on the new frontier
   Courageous as we stand
   Your will done by our hands
your presence never fades
unto our passing days
     We will rise to you
         By your side
The sand will break the glass
So time repeats the past
   And our gifts shall be given
   In the name of the risen
I have heard your voice
I have made my choice
   We have heard your call
         By your side
Climbing through the years
We harvest many tears
   We’ve witnessed to the land
   It’s straying from your plan
You’ve charged us with your power
To serve until the hour
   We will serve to you
         By your side.

Silent Evincar
Member

since 2003-07-22

Posts 179
Here There and Places Between

1 posted 2003-10-02 10:43 PM

I can't help but thinking kings, among elves and dwarfs. Certain movies will do that to your imagery though. I like it, there's alot of strength coming from it as well as a floating loyalty. I also am fond of the way you indent your lines, nice trademark style.

NJS

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-10-03 12:56 PM

good write.

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