Solar Fireworks Stolen From The 4th

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Teen Poetry #7

Solar Fireworks Stolen From The 4th

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2004-08-19 02:10 PM

the sun is floating higher
in a relative sort of way,
releasing tongues of treason
to discipline children of reason,
dialogue, when played backwards, spells
the number of days until the bright eye
in the sky trips over this stony earth.
play that song slower...slower...
ah! there's the word (traced in vinyl scratches),
it says "nothing", summing up our existance.
The sun must laugh when we discover atoms
and try to destroy each other with our words,
to the sun, ha*e reaches it's solar flares
and is burned away with memories of fallible humanity.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-08-19 05:37 PM

"releasing tongues of treason
to discipline children of reason,
dialogue, when played backwards, spells
the number of days until the bright eye
in the sky trips over this stony earth."

I think that was the best part. The poem was okay. I dont know, it just wasnt as good as most of ur other ones...

Karissa

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

2 posted 2004-08-20 04:37 PM

thaks karissa, i'm glad that you are hard to please

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