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Teen Poetry #7

So Much At Once

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2004-01-17 10:48 PM

So much at once
Culminating to higher points
The struggle overwhelms
My heart now distant

Emotions running away
Fearful of what may happen
Control never seems to stay
While trusting in those who rarely listen

So often I find
My head between my knees
Crying out for satisfaction
In the tears life brings

In those soulfull cries
I know the sun looks up
Seeing passed the apathy and the lies
I know I must push move forward

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-01-18 08:36 AM

resonant and determined. a good write!

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-01-18 02:33 PM

This was...a wonderful poem. Short, but sweet! I hope to hear more!
~kissa~

**~kissa~**
*I wanna be a little more like me, and a little less like YOU!*~ Linkin Park

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