Teen Poetry #7 |
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they [[JUDGE]] |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
they judge you by your mistakes? IS IT RIGHT? they judge you by being stupid ? IS IT RIGHT? they judge you because your attitude? IS THAt right? they judge you for being you? is that right? BUT THEY DONT JUDGE WHAT YOU GO IN YOU.. THEY DONT JUDGE YOU BY YOUR SWEETHEART OR ATLEAST YOUR PERSONALY BELIEFS..THEY JUDGE YOU BECAUSE THEY HATE YOU AND THEY DONT NOTHING GOOD FOR YOU.. |
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sweet_lost_palestinian1 Member
since 2004-01-08
Posts 90 |
SORRY ABOUT SOME MISTAKES I MADE IN THIS POEM.. |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
just a soft touch, dont use all caps, its painful to read and does not show the true spirit of the poem.....try and edit this using lower case letters? ~*~ |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
NAH, ALL CAPS IS FINE FINE FINE. KEEP DOING WHAT YOU DO. I MEAN, LETS FACE IT, THERE ARE MORE WAYS TO EXPRESS YOURSELF WITH PAPER AND PEN THAN with THESE COMPUTERS, SO we HAVE TO USE WHAT WE'VE GOT*****************************************************************************************************************************************&^$(Y) |
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