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Teen Poetry #7

A Confused Reality

Xonicx
Junior Member

since 2004-01-14

Posts 20
Vancouver, WA

0 posted 2004-01-14 01:48 PM

A short breath of reality sets me in confusion
Strung out and can't find a conclusion

What is to come of this life of mine?
Where will I end up in the ends of time

My road is full of twists and turns
Headaches and heartaches that inside burn

But at every corner there is a new side to things
Confusion yes, but happiness also it brings

Wishes and dreams of a new tomorrow
Without pain, heartache, or sorrow

I see the truth in the dreams
Try to put the puzzel pieces together to see what it means

But I think a lost a piece that i've been trying to find
Life is confusing and twisting me in a bind

Things will work out eventually
I'll find the puzzel piece that is for certanity.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2004-01-14 05:04 PM

Wow..I REALLY liked this one. There was a few places that seemed like you had to force it to rhyme, but overall it was awesome. well done.

"Pain is just weakness escaping the body."

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

2 posted 2004-01-14 10:03 PM

Loved this.

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