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Teen Poetry #7

A hold on me

muchos
Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-01-10 11:52 AM

Its got a strong hold over me
Like an orgasm caused from love
You yearn for the feel and comfort
But its nowhere to be found
Desire is the key to temptation
And I desire one more taste
Where you fly and feel free
Tempted to get back into life
If I give in to it once more
It will reign, and i will strife
Goodbye white doves
You were calming and always sweet
Goodbye my crystals
You were wakening and so broad
Goodbye soft tacos
You were new and so exciting
Goodbye to the life where this exists
For now, but not for always
The hold has got me tight
If I'm stong enough today
I may put up a fight

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

1 posted 2004-01-10 01:21 PM

hi...u got a veryy nice poem keep it up and keep writting more

Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member

since 2002-11-10

Posts 153
Ma, U.S.A

2 posted 2004-01-11 11:50 AM

Ashley hun another great write from you. You are really talented and have the ability to write about your feeling that day so smoothly. Keep up the great work angel.

Hugs,
Chris

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