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Teen Poetry #7

If Only

EmergedSweety
New Member

since 2003-12-24

Posts 1
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2003-12-24 01:56 AM

If only I could go back,
go back and do it all over.
Go back and Help them,
the ones whohurt so much

If only I listened
If only I learned
If only I saw,
saw the pain in my own face,
saw the hate, greed, deceite

If only I could do something,
Anything
To bring them out of the world,
that world that sucked them in.

If only.....

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

1 posted 2003-12-24 03:32 PM

hmmm...it was alright. kinda simple, but simple isnt always bad.....welcome to piptalk by the way. keep posting!!
-alex

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

2 posted 2003-12-27 08:51 PM

welcome to pip, nice first post, it made me think, can't wait to hear more from you

~*~Karen~*~

"One can never consent to creep when one feels the impulse to soar" - Helen Keller

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