Teen Poetry #7 |
Nothing To Hide |
Baby D Junior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 14 |
Although he's nowhere near me, and i can't see his face, i can still feel his arms around me, and his heart beating at a steady pace, i can feel his hot breath, and hear his voice whisphering in my ear, playful and seductive, and suddenly i wish that he were near. i can taste his sweet kiss, and feel his lips against mine, he's surely be in jail, if great kisses were a crime, i remember the way he spoke to me, and all the words he said, the way he said he loved me, and that he truly cared. somehow i know that it's the truth, just by simply looking into his eyes, i know that he truly loves me, there's nothing for him to hide [This message has been edited by Baby D (12-18-2003 01:18 AM).] |
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muchos Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 102 |
i like this poem, and i can relate, but it makes me think, are all guys like that, because ive felt like that with all the guys i've been with, but maybe there just really good at seducing girls, just to get into the're pants....im a little skeptical. anyways. nice write, keep it up@!! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is beautiful....a true, honest love is so precious.... ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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DarkAngel73554 Junior Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 10somewhere in tha middle of nowhere |
~!nice piece~! |
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