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Teen Poetry #7
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adbdesperado18
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since 2003-11-30
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0 posted 2003-12-14 11:10 AM

Numbers of days,
Figures of dials,
Turn,
A constructed wall
Emerged,

Lumber pieces erected,
Cement
Profusely emitted,
Paint
Thickly bestowed,
Sealing,
Shielding,
From the abyss beyond,
Drowning
Cacophonic screams
Of inner depths,
Burying from
The lurid unkown,

As sands fall
Through a glass pear,
Each strip
Of paint,
Peels,
Tortured cement,
Fractures,

Revealing
Abysmal,
Void,
Ebony
Coils,
Blotches, of
Unneeded glue
Upon bare wood,

The same,
Scarred,
Lined,
Burned
Lumber,
The wall
Originated from
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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2003-12-14 03:16 PM

Powerful--I liked all the descriptions in this.

~sky

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-12-14 09:46 PM

an enjoyable read
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