Teen Poetry #7 |
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Everything and Nothing |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I'm sorry, I wish there was more to say, To simply take your pain, And make it all fade away. I'm sorry, For causing you so much despair, And giving you more pain, Than you should have to bare. I'm sorry, For I've become a nothing, And for ever giving back, A certain chain and ring... You are everything. "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Lots of pain in this, and remorse - well done! |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
Okay...I forgive you, this was an awesome peice, so much pain and emotion, yet it's stated so simple, I hope she forgave you, thanks for the great read. sha-sha |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
You mean...."I hope HE forgave you" "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
This was good... **To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.** |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
tis true, without the other half......nothing. good one. |
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shara Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 69florida/USA |
so sorry, i hope HE forgave you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
you are and always will be much much more than a nothing, and he... he don't deserve ya anyhow hon... love ya Staci....Heart hugs neice of mine.... |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Thanks everyone, I'm glad you liked this. "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Very good. That's all I can say...this was just awesome. Loves. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome piece I really can relate to what you are going through.Keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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