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Teen Poetry #7

Finding myself

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-09-29 02:05 PM

I try to find myself
but I run away

I try to find a home
but I’ll never stay

I have to help myself
but I can't get it right

I have to calm down with myself
but all I so is fight

I can't find level ground
there's no where to put my feet

my mind is a battle field
and I march to the same beat

I try to run away
but that's always where I’ll be

so no matter how much I change
I will always have to see me

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-09-29 03:49 PM

Matt- This is EXACTLY what I felt as a teenager (back when dinosaurs raomed the planet,of course). Of course, I never had the talent to express it this eloquently. I truly enjoyed this one immensely.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

2 posted 2003-09-29 03:51 PM

Great work, I enjoyed this one! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

3 posted 2003-10-23 04:56 PM

always have to be me......great!(said with sarcasm)

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