This is my firt one, let me know.

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Teen Poetry #7

This is my firt one, let me know.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

0 posted 2003-11-30 12:23 PM

How can people be?

How can people be so cruel?
To treat others like tools.

How can people be so mean?
And always make a big seen,
He said this,
And she said that.

How can people take advantage?
Of what others give,
Why not take what you have?
And live.

How can people be so uncaring,
So truly daring,
Hurting others is not a game,
Why not play Scrabble?
And save me the pain.

UnsilencedWords666
Member

since 2003-11-19

Posts 63
Broken Memories & Falling Tears

1 posted 2003-11-30 12:29 PM

First off->Welcome...Welcome....Welcome... anywho-this was short but sweet, I like that it was too the point and I personally like poems that rhyme...good job and hope to read more posts from you :o)

*~*Nessa Bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

broken627
Member

since 2003-11-26

Posts 66
Eugene Oregon

2 posted 2003-11-30 03:50 PM

this was great i can feel you all to well.cant wait to hear more!
-*-Broken627-*-

Ally Stone
Junior Member

since 2003-10-20

Posts 48
D.C.

3 posted 2003-11-30 03:54 PM

Nicely done, welcome to Passions!

wvplayernotreally
Member

since 2002-11-06

Posts 215
yakima wa

4 posted 2003-11-30 03:58 PM

excellent first post! I loved the last stanza. Simply amazing. I am looking forward to more of your writes

" I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking."

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