Teen Poetry #7 |
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red-hued ruin |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN ![]() |
red-hued ruin im tired of tired of darkness but again and again i slip into the red night The stars are A different hue here The moon rises and stays for my duration Every person looks Just like you They stand stone faced looking for more hearts to tear I trudge up to your home only to find that its torn down only memories are left on the ground soaking up the bloody rain Ruined forever are my hopes The dreams that stayed in me were crushed that day along with the house you smiled when you watched the wrecker move into position you laughed at the destruction the total end of me |
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Why Junior Member
since 2003-09-26
Posts 32Middle of nowhere |
great work, i dont really know what to say. besides that its going in my library Poems free us and trap us all the same. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very dark but good write. well done! |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
thanks guys, im going for darker ones these days... |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
smiling.....destruction....i like how those words seem to go together. good write. |
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