Are You Happy With Your Life?

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Teen Poetry #7

Are You Happy With Your Life?

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

0 posted 2006-08-22 04:17 PM

Sit down
Take a look at your life
Do you feel good about yourself
And how you feel inside

This is a material world
Its nothing new to you
The world revolves around looks
And you know its the truth

You arnt popular
And this tweaks your hate
But you cant blame them
For what they state

So you resolve you anger
By draining the whole bottle
Do you love your suicide
Your taking it at full throttle

Inhale deeply
And beath in your death
Exhale the pressure
Can you see through this mess

So sit down
And take a look at your strife
Are you happy with yourself
Are you happy with your life

mgoodman1989
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 93
Iowa, USA

1 posted 2006-08-22 04:28 PM

Powerful Write!!

Me likey

Much Love,

Michelle

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-08-22 10:31 PM

I very strongly agree..

I loved this..

~heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

3 posted 2006-08-23 01:35 AM

okay goin in my library, Such a good write.
and isnt it so true that people revolve everything around looks...WHO CARES ABOUT LOOKS HONESTLY!!! sigh...its sad how people judge others...im speaking to myself here too.  man...we as humans can be so prejudice and just ahh! okay you brought up lots of thoughts in my mind as u can see

i love this poem.  its amazing.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2006-08-23 02:02 AM

this was beautifully written.... i can kinda relate to some parts of this poem unfortunatly but this was awesome hope to read more form you.
hunnie*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

5 posted 2006-08-23 11:01 AM

Wow! The flow and the meaning in this poem was more than amazing, it was more like brilliant. I loved this poem; how the words just seemed to flow off your tongue into the next word. I think that this is one of the best I've seen you write, it is very, very good.

Thanks so much for sharing this one; I'm glad I didn't miss out on reading it

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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