Teen Poetry #7 |
Confused |
broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
I can’t take this confusion That’s inside my head I want to be with you Yet I want to be with him You say he won’t find out Just an innocent kiss Just a simple touch But this for me Is way too much I can’t take it and I don’t know what to do How can I want him Yet be in love with you? This is not what I expected When I became his girl I thought I’d love him forever He’s the best guy in the world How could I hurt him The way you want me to Confused is all I am Who should I choose? Should I break his heart Before he breaks mine Or should I just let it be See what it brings in time You know I wont forget you You are my best friend And my love for you Will never end But he’s the one I dream of The one who’s always there The one I’ll always love He will always care |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey broken_smile1469, Beautiful, emotional, poem! I loved this one a lot! The "confusion" in it is awesome. Yet, if you are going through this at the moment I'm sorry, but didn't you just answer your questions on who you want to be with in this poem? Humm... I don't know what I'm talking about... lol I liked how your poem dealt with the issues of love and lust; at least that's how I interpreted it, and the issues of wanting two people at once… Thanks for sharing! I felt it was a wonderful read and I will be coming back to read this one again "I pray thee, O God, that I |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
thanks |
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