Teen Poetry #7 |
A Dream or Not( This is when i thought i found him!) |
Abiola Junior Member
since 2006-08-09
Posts 29 |
I OPEN THE DOOR 2 A NEW BEGININNG TO SEE WHAT IS LYIN BE4 MY EYES IS IT A WORLD OF GOOD, PASSIONATE, LOVE OF JUST UN-JOY? I GUESS IT'S GOOD BECAUSE I FOUND U FROM THE DAY I LED EYES ON U MY WORLD TURN 2 A NEW BEGINNING MY WHOLE BODY FELT THAT INTERNAL RUST A FEELIN I NEVER FELT ONCE BE4 A GREAT FEELIN I MUST ADMIT THE WAY WE CONNECT IS SO BEAUTIFUL THE UNCONDITION CARE WE HAVE FOR ONE OTHER IS SO SWEET NO ONE CAN SHARE WHAT WE HAVE B/C IT'S U AND ME I WILL NEVER FORGET WHO U R THE THINGS U DO 4 ME WILL I EVER TOP IT? UR AMAZING I MUST SAY AND I REALLY LIKE THAT HOW DID I FIND AN LOVING ,SMART, CARING AND HONEST PERSON LIKE U DID THE MAN UP STAIRS SEND U 2 ME? I DON'T KNOW BUT I HOPE U R A KEY 2 MY HEART I HOPE U WILL BE THE ONE TO KEEP THE SMILE ON MY FACE AND KEEP ME HAPPY I DON'T WANT 2 LOSE A PERSON LIKE U I REALLY DON'T BECAUSE U JUST BRIGHTEN UP MY DAY EVERY TIME I SEE OR HEAR FROM U WILL THESES FEELINGS EVER CHANGE? WILL U LIE 2 ME? WILL U BREAK MY HEART? WILL U TREAT ME BAD? IS IT ANYTHING I HAVE 2 WORRY ABOUT?? LET ME KNOW WELL I GOTTA SAY I LO LO LO LO LOVE U WELL I THINK SO I'M NOT SURE OR MAYBE IT'S IN-FASCINATION I DON'T KNOW, I'M YOUNG U KNOW ONLy 16 GOTTA LEARN THESE THINGS JUST HOPE I'M GOIN IN THE RIGHT DIRECTIONS NO MISTAKES I HOPE (wait a minute was this a dream???, let a sista know) Abiola Adekahunsi |
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Fuschia Junior Member
since 2006-06-19
Posts 35England |
I really liked this poem. I can relate to it all so well at the moment, being almost sixteen and feeling exactly the same. It was well written. However, it would be good if you could write it out fully. Not in text language! WELL I GOTTA SAY I LO LO LO LO LOVE U WELL I THINK SO I'M NOT SURE OR MAYBE IT'S IN-FASCINATION I DON'T KNOW, I'M YOUNG U KNOW ONLy 16 GOTTA LEARN THESE THINGS And if you love someone that much then age doesn't matter.There is always things to learn at every age. I'm sure your going in the right direction. THE WAY WE CONNECT IS SO BEAUTIFUL THE UNCONDITION CARE WE HAVE FOR ONE OTHER IS SO SWEET NO ONE CAN SHARE WHAT WE HAVE B/C IT'S U AND ME I WILL NEVER FORGET WHO U R THE THINGS U DO 4 ME WILL I EVER TOP IT? UR AMAZING I MUST SAY AND I REALLY LIKE THAT I loved this stanza best! xxFuschiaxx |
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