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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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0 posted 2006-08-10 06:36 PM



Yes I've lied, but no I won't die.
Just because you think I cheated on you,
but you wouldn't listen through.
I bet if you listened, you would of known that our relationship would have flowed.
Yes he kissed me, but I did not kiss him.
So what do you think now?
Are you about to pout?
I thought you would of probably forgave me,
but now I can finally see.
I know I hurt you,
I would also take away what ever pain you went through.
Since that situation was 2 years ago... will you please forget about the past.
All I can say now is " I'm sorry for what you heard, but can you please let me rest."


This poem is towards this guy I dated when i was in 9th grade and one of my other friends kissed me and it turned out to be a whole dramma thing and somebody saw me and him, but he only saw the kissing part. not me slapping the other guy in the face. So yeah I got blamed for everything.

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
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1 posted 2006-08-10 08:24 PM


Hey cherrys_rule,

Sorry to hear you had to go through something like that, those are hard times…

I’m not sure that I would call this poem my favorite, favorite, by you but I did like it, it sort of had an … “it wasn’t my fault so shut up” attitude to it… lol

Great job this was a pleasure to read

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

2 posted 2006-08-11 04:19 PM


Yeah I am too... but what ever it's in the past...
We see each other every now and then, but we only say hi or sup something like that. I just wish we could have a decent conversation for once... but now we have nothing much to say. I really do miss him though. IF he read this, I don't know what he would say to me. I don't know right now... so I'll wait for the perfect time to show him.

[This message has been edited by cherrys_rule (08-11-2006 07:27 PM).]

Tempest
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since 2006-04-28
Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!
3 posted 2006-08-11 11:08 PM


That sounds like a plan. Good write and thanks for sharing.
               ~Tempest~

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