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how you play the lying game. D
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how you play the lying game. D |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
written for D. i thought of you. caus u just cant tell me the truth even when we both know you are lying to me. You lied to me, Yet you ask to be forgiven Calling me names, you treat me like dirt Only, when people can see We are alone, you want my trust given But then the next day, my secrets you blurt What do you want, truly I ask I’m confused here, talk to me, and please just give me a hint One day my friend, the next its me you hate If the guys are around, you are a brat A couple of my good friends, your meanness not even a glint When will you fess up, just be true, a long wait How can you keep this up, the lying game? Where you act like I’m your friend, if the girls are there But soon as they turn their backs, to show off, you insult me, my looks Or anything else that you can think of, it’s all the same I know what you mean, that kindness from you will be rare If it can be an insult you make it one, how I am, that I love to read books With you it’s a turntable, then together alone You can be a friend, but only when you want to be Other times, the devils daughter in being cruel Then, your true feelings, are definitely shown To you just someone to humiliate there is no me. Then I get mad, but you make yourself seem a fool False accusations, twisted words, screams, swearing Hanging up on me, trying to hurt me, I wonder what you really think of who I am You aren’t very telling, how you switch from day to day I try to explain, does no good, you look back, uncaring Personally, about now I think everything good you ever said, all of it was just a sham Its me you want to trust you but always me who you betray What is your problem, I am not joking, tell Why do you this, try to make me bleed Inside, sometimes rarely do you succeed Now, I don’t even hear you when you yell. |
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oh_my_goshijustgotexcited Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 52USA, IDAHO |
wow, sounds like this person is a jerk face! but very good poem! loves and hugs Viola |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Mmm… yes, it does sound like this person is an idiot, but what do I know…(but I do know, this poem told me so! This person IS an idiot~!) lol… Well, I hope you feel better, cause I consider this kind of poem venting, no offence if you don’t like that, but in my poetry I vent all the time. It’s a good thing, it releasing all your anger so you don’t go out and pound the person in the face! Sorry, I don't seem to have anything constructive to say at the moment... "What is your problem, I am not joking, tell Why do you this, try to make me bleed Inside, sometimes rarely do you succeed Now, I don’t even hear you when you yell." - Like this part though, like the last half a lot! It's kind of like you are mocking this person. I don't know, I'm not even sure what I'm talking about, but I do LIKE this part... Thanks for sharing  PS - IF I have missed reading/commenting on any of your poems and you want me too, please let me know @-->--- |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
stargal, wut about afterdeath, and forgive and forget |
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