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Somewhere Outside of Here |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world 
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I'm left with a box full of your memories and a life of nothing but uncertainties. Your smile and your eyes are my demise, I'm stuck in the past and lost in the lies (I'm moving on..as I see you drift away.) (I'm letting go of everything I tried to say.) So, baby, take me somewhere outside of here reminds me of the days that lacked all the tears. Show me the disappointments and remind me why they were always worth all the tears that i cried. I need to know that this is worth it too, cause baby I don't know if I'll ever get over you. So tell me what i can do to get past it all Cause I hate to inform you but I couldn't help but fall. I didn't intend to, it's brought so much pain. I wouldn't have played if I knew it was all a game. ( I'm moving on...as I see you drift away.) ( I'm letting go of everything I tried to say.) So, baby, take me somewhere outside of here reminds me of the days that lacked all the tears. Show me the disappointments and remind me why they were always worth all the tears that i cried. I need to know that this is worth it too, cause baby I don't know if I'll ever get over you. Tell me did you mean every word you said? I cause I bought every line that you fed. I guess I'll always just be the one who's left behind, and all because I fell for every line. So, baby, take me somewhere outside of here reminds me of the days that lacked all the tears. Show me the disappointments and remind me why they were always worth all the tears that i cried. I need to know that this is worth it too, cause baby I don't know if I'll ever get over you. I don't know if I'll ever get over you.... Can we escape to a far away land where we will forever remain.. Living as one and walking hand in hand.... [This message has been edited by tapper798 (06-23-2006 05:35 PM).] |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
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I loved this.. I liked how you repeated some stanzas.. it kinda sounds like it could be a song.. great job.. this is one of my favorites by you.. keep them coming..  ~Heather ps-going in my library! Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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