Teen Poetry #7 |
I Really Don't Understand You |
Sweetie01 Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28NJ, USA |
Why'd you tell her? I'd really like to know Did you think she'd see and tell me And I'd put on a show? I don't know why you even care YOU left ME with a broken heart Into which, for your enjoyment, you could stare Do you still like me? If you do, please tell me why. Do you get enjoyment out of seeing me cry? You are trying to pull me back to you Where, into your arms I will not fall If you did this earlier Maybe I'd come But it is later And your arms are the first place I run from I do not like you anymore So get it strait That you and I will never again date! ~*~Amanda~*~ [This message has been edited by Sweetie01 (05-30-2006 04:51 PM).] |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
this has really great...well everything, i like it... ~L |
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scyzoryk_o4 Junior Member
since 2006-05-23
Posts 36Canada and Poland |
Hey, Awesome poem, it’s strait from your heart so I’m sure it will go strait to any ones heart who reads it, it did to mine anyway. Oh and I don’t wanna be rude or anything but I think u forgot a “r” in this line “And you arms are the first place I run from” Maksym |
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Sweetie01 Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28NJ, USA |
thank you for the replies. Yea, I did miss an r, thanks for telling me. ~*~Amanda~*~ |
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