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Teen Poetry #7

What am I

penguin5
Junior Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 21
Washington

0 posted 2006-05-24 09:55 PM

I am a photocopy
of all that I see,
Just pages of a magazine
on my body and in my brain

My rebellion is fake
for my methodes are preplanned
I ignore my parents
just like MTV

Or is that just the way of the world
every person a smoothie of what they see
mixing, matching and changing ingredients

to create

what is

humanity?

scyzoryk_o4
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 36
Canada and Poland

1 posted 2006-05-24 10:27 PM

Hey, i can relate to this poem as ive thought about this often lately. For shure individuality is depleting in our generation, every one seems to be following main streem ideas and any one who tries to be different just gets dround in the masses.

Maksym

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-05-26 12:01 PM

wow. I loved it.. this is going in my library.. it's short and not to say simple but it is very clear to me what you meant here.. it was great keep it up..

`Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

Sweetpali08
Junior Member

since 2006-05-07

Posts 40

3 posted 2006-05-26 12:28 PM

niceeeeee

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

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