Teen Poetry #7 |
Divine Sin |
Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
There’s a cleric with a gun to my head Constant images of crucifixes marked blood red I see the contaminated dogs fixed to tarnished sheds I see the decrepit women chained to disincarnating beds It’s like I said I dread the night Satan dies God will rise and nail me a hell bent Ill do my shift in the blaze An eternity to find what I Broke An Eternity to reap and sow To plant the seed and watch it Bestow.. Life to encircle me in my Organic Robe I plow in pristine rows I’m a Pinocchio With a broken nose I’m a Moses with a shattered staff I look death in the eyes and sardonically laugh I hunger for the daylight but I know I would crumble at the sight Feebly dreaming of teaming life screaming for the knife The squeal of that organism Sends me back towards the imperial prison With the Heretics Schism I look thru the opaque prism The scene is tinted crimson My eyes gaze at the Goat on the sacrificial Slab At the suicidal Arab At the brainless Americans Proliferating it’s with nothing to respire for fad It’s a divine Sin So I dream on with a prophetic Grin I sit calm numbed by the gin Im robotic in motion basically armored in tin Im battery powered so I tend to lose power but im easy to mend "I'm floating the hoaming pigeon out hell's kitchen window Left an SOS infested bottle nestled in his grip" Aesop Rock |
||
© Copyright 2006 Jose Luis Fabiani Jr. - All Rights Reserved | |||
Sweetie01 Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28NJ, USA |
Its an interesting and different poem, but I liked it. I think you are a very good writer and I'm looking forward to reading more from you. Amanda<33 |
||
Pauline Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28Island in the Sun... |
i liked it! it's got great rhythm and rhyming but doesn't really make much sense???....that's probably why i liked it :-) |
||
Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
yea there really wasn't ne point to it at all just a bunch of things that made no since Thanks For the Feedback i really Appriciate it ^_^~ <3 [This message has been edited by Fabiani (05-23-2006 07:38 PM).] |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |