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SwimminPoet05 New Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 6Massachusetts, US |
Alone Lost in a dream never-ending A long dark trial never pending Eyes closed tight tears of sadness Knees weak with fear slumped in a dark uncertianness All alone, no one around tears of lonliness fall quietly to the ground unheard whispers speak Feelings of love - unrequited Longings of hope - undecided Alone |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
the ending just says it all doesnt it? |
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greco Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 85buffalo ny |
All alone, no one around tears of lonliness fall quietly to the ground very nice i liked how this stanza went very good wrtie very smooth and thats what kept me reading it good write |
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