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The Seven |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! 
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Betwixt the heavens Born of skies On broken burning wings he flies Wrought of evil Crowned in flames He is the king of many names With a single blade Bound in blood The wallmakers treasure Bring salvations flood Through the darkness The seven stood Armed with bells And willing to die for the greater good Peace with a dream Is what the seven sought The bells are ringing The king is caught With a mighty crash The blade was gone With hopes that tomarrow Will be a brighter dawn As the smoke cleared The seven stood tall The bells are still ringing In the song of lifes call |
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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az |
awsome~! reminds me of one of my metal songs \m/ ^_^~ |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey Tempest, Let me just say this is a very interesting post, and it's unlike anything i've read by you before. This is a little bit darker, maybe even a little bit deeper... I'm not sure i understand all of it though. Is the seven talking about any specific characters, or just the "heros" of the story? I really enjoyed the first stanza though, it just drew me right into the poem, i just had to see more! and.. i wasn't disapointed, i enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing this, i can't wait to see more!  Also, i'm sorry i didn't reply on this one sooner, but i'm glad i didn't miss it. @-->--- |
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