Teen Poetry #7 |
Valor(I Put My Soul In This Piece) |
Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
A soldier raises his flag Its his soul and his shield On this stained battle field He throws a salute to his fellow fallen troops And never wonders if he'll make it out safe With a look of duty painted on his face He looks up at the flag And says a quick prayer Then turns to fight for all that is fair He hears a man scream then comes to his aid Only to watch as his life fades away He can only close his eyes As the tears stream down his face as he cries He gives a salute to honor this troop And never looks back as he runs in valor In the darkest of hours He never gives up hope in these places He only thinks of his loved ones faces And it makes him proud On this crude battle shroud To be fighting for his people His country His freedom A soldier raises his flag up high To fly forever in the freest of skies |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
wow.. lots of emotion loved it.. ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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Pauline Junior Member
since 2006-05-15
Posts 28Island in the Sun... |
life is a battlefield... very captivating! |
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ska babe Member
since 2005-11-08
Posts 58nowwhere, IN |
its touching almost as if i were there in his place good write.. "I am the one who has to die when it's my time to die, so I'm gonna live life the way I wanna"- Jimi Hendrix |
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