Teen Poetry #7 |
Reality |
Sweetpali08 Junior Member
since 2006-05-07
Posts 40 |
When those who are shut with words. Play around to change a world itself. Get stabbed in the back. Release memorizes of those who left them suffer. To fight for something they truly need or want. How can those doors open up for them; To show them what they dream't to see? When in reality, Those were the doors built from guilt, Regret. The history that built the hatred of people in one heart. How do people expect others to live up life when in reality; those who were the reason for destroying mankind. Memorizes go. People leave. What happend to the world that God created? No smiles are shown, No guilt is revealed. But money is what played everydays' role. What happend to those who made the sun shine so freely up those skies? Flowers smelling so deeply like they actually had hearts? What happend to those loving siblings? Seperated from each side and glued to another world that they never touched? What happend to the moon that was rised within each loving two hearts. That met on that bridge of love? When those doors are open and suddenly someone gets the chance. Someone must die. and so those doors of hope. Suddenly disappear!! In a far away Reach. "How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!" ~Paradise now [This message has been edited by Sweetpali08 (05-16-2006 02:15 PM).] |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I liked this a lot.. not my fav. by you but a really good write.. I love how you use your words.. great job.. ~Heather keep it up.. i hope to hear more.. Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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