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Junebug Junior Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 40earth |
The sounds of your voice. The look on your face. The pleasure you bring me, With your sweet grace. The touch of your hand. The song of your breath. If i forget these, Let my eyes close in death. The scent of your smell. The gleam in your eyes. Why didnt we say it? We should've said our good-byes. Let you be with me. Let me remember you aye. Please come back, Your fading away! The sounds of your voice is like heavens wind chimes, The look on your face reminds me of good times, The pleasure you bring me is like a barefoot walk in the sand, The softness of the clowds is like the touch of your hand, The song of your breath is like an angels song, And the scent of your smell stays with me all day long, The gleam in your eyes brightens my day, Do you have to go? Why cant you stay? Your fading away, How can that be? You will forever, be in my memory! |
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ThePrayers0faBrokenHeart Junior Member
since 2006-03-19
Posts 10guam, harmon |
this was good! cnt believe no one commented yet ! lol ,.. its a good piece of ur work! ,.. i can relate to this poem! well keep on writing poems !!! lol sha shoot ! -chrissy x|3 "&& i realy love you and it hurts me that you dont even a damn care <<3" |
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poise_and_rationality Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46my mind |
yea it was a wicked poem porbaly one of your bests  going to my librarypar x house of compusure where is your posture? |
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