Teen Poetry #7 |
I Need Nothing Else. |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
The emotions, Fade into nothing. A numb feeling. Like a winter coldness, Crept into my room, Entered my head, Making me no longer, Feel. Care. Why should I? I know you don’t. Maybe...no one does. So...why should I? Trapped inside, This icy terrain, I can’t breathe. I can’t think. Good. Knowing what’s going on around me, I don’t want to think. I don’t want to cross that line, That will send me into the drama. I don’t need that. Falling. Deeper into the freeze. So cold... That numbing feeling comes back, I welcome it. I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Trapped inside, This icy terrain, I can’t breathe. I can’t think. Good." excellent |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
Staci, MG, this was AwEsOmE! I loved EVERY work of this poem! GREAT write! ~J.Lynn **To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.** |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
i dont get the title.... |
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