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Restless Daughter
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Restless Daughter |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245
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"Wake up, restless daughter." The one you've risen into your own life The wrong life. You call them "stone-cold memories" And that's all they are. Remembering the midnight fire, that lit my heart up in smoke So you could blow away the ashes. So easily you forgot the rain, A sleeping ambition, deep inside "Someday" remains an era of unsweetened dreams and "yesterday" the owner and breeder of a restless sleep. [this uses some lines i've use before so they may sound familiar...} |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Very interesting!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
great job! |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
...if we do not fight to the death...they will kill us both....(que klingon battle music) |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
I like this poem a lot. I like the part about the stone-cold memory part. When you twist around to see the past you're missing your chance to glimpse the future. |
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