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PrincessNets Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 103NewYork, USA |
Ok, this one is kind of sad and based on something that I actually went through, so hope you like it! --------------------------------- Moping around All day long Trying to forget All that you Put me through Never can manage To wipe my slate clean To let you know Would be too much The hurt you caused Pain left behind In your wake Never can forget it That would mean Forgetting you And that I just cannot do We had our good times too The princess I felt I was Satisfaction in your love Honor, Pride, Self-worth They all came with you And now they are gone too No way you'll come back No sense in crying But sense I don't have Crying over you Missing you everyday Wondering what went wrong Could it have been Better if we tried... Moping around All day long |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
this was really well done, and I actually went through the same thing when I was with my ex. He treated me like **** but after we broke up I still only thought of him and what could have been. Believe me, he's not worth it if he treated you bad! I'm super happy now with a new man. Sorry you had to got through this. Great job  |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
I really enjoyed reading your poem cuz i am going though the same thing with a guy. I met him over a year ago and things just are not like how they used to be, i want a relationship and he doesn't, and he is on my mind all the time.....it doesn't seem like it can ever get better.....but heres to hoping!! Excellent poem!! ~*~You can see it or you can dream it, that's your call~*~ |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
i miss my princess....(sniffle sniffle) |
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