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Losing hope over you
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Losing hope over you |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
I’m sick of waiting for that guy I speak to every night every day I come to school hoping for a better you but every day I see you you’re scared showing our real you Like you told me be for you’re another guy when you’re here at school stop the act and be yourself be for you’re to late when you come to terms with what I’m trying to say I’ll have moved on to a better day so if their truly you’re friends they’ll understand and not disconnect [This message has been edited by aliway (03-28-2006 03:30 PM).] |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
this poem, it seems, had been fed by reality. wonderfully expressed though, curiouse Curioustity is a fine gift... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Let me just say this is a great poem! The spelling errors really throw it off though, the first time I read this I was like, “Wow! What in the world is this about”, after I read it though, I noticed that the spelling is what was wrong. Like, “be for you’re to late when you come to terms “ it should be, “before you’re to late”, just so you know there are a few sentences like the one I pointed out. I love this poem though! How it shows you need to speak truth, be truth…. It’s just amazing. Thanks again for sharing your poems @-->--- |
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