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Teen Poetry #7

Cold Air

SimpleDiscourse
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 79

0 posted 2003-11-16 08:51 PM

I’m not so sure
If winter bodes well for me this year
Because I get so wrapped up in
The cold air and
The way you look
As you try to keep warm.
And I find myself
Crying over melodies
Because they move so perfectly
Like your silhouette against the cold streetlight.
There is nothing quite as perfect
As your breath in the frozen night air.
I’m not so sure
If winter bodes well for me this year
Because I get so wrapped up in
The cold air and
The way my hands
Cannot keep themselves warm.

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

1 posted 2003-11-16 11:54 PM

word....my hands are always cold too.

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2003-11-17 12:09 PM

I love the cold, going outside and staying there untill your numb and then when you go back inside and you feel all tingley I love that feeling...Great poem!
-ash

I know you think that I shouldnt still love you
I'll tell you that
But if I didn't say it
Well, I'd still have felt it
Where's the sense in tha

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