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ShelbyLynn13 Member
since 2006-02-15
Posts 73US, Colorodo |
blonde hair blue eyes? overated skirts the size of a small american flag? overated legs as long as texas? overated school? for six hours? overated just because you say things you dont mean does that make me overated? because i have long legs? or i am not a toothpick or a plump grapefruit? that makes me overated? you hurt me! just because i dont look like the american dream! and im not a playboy bunny! just because i am or not those things doesn't mean that you cant like me! so you are saying you cant like me just because i dont have the dream body? every one is special in their own way!!! |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
hey umm this is good  I have never seen a poem wrote like this but it all fits in so well......great work!x0x0 |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
i agree with freespirit07. never read anything like it. Its good though. not everone has there dream body and you point that out. nice write Jessica |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
this is so true, curiouse |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Yes, this is so true. I can really relate. Good job getting your feelings out.  ~Alli~ |
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