Teen Poetry #7 |
Trapped |
helenadepp Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 59durham, england |
I know everyone needs someone But maybe I just need to be alone With these disappearing morals Living in a disappearing world Who would of known? I know a lot of bodies But not a lot of friends With their haunting smiles Their haunting words Can this reality bend? I know that im a pusher But I seem to push people away With my messed up ways My messed up life Do I even want you to stay? I know I hate this world But maybe others do too Wishing for an apocalypse Wishing for a better place Who will make it true? |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to Piptalk Helen This is a very interesting and enjoyable read; “I know a lot of bodies But not a lot of friends” is a phrase that I think quite a lot of people can identify with, Napoleon Bonaparte expressed a similar notion during his schooling “Alone in the midst of men”. Whilst It may feel like you are alone, there are always people there even if it is only other lonely souls. Anyway great writing, I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Andrew |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You will....and this poem is a step well taken. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
the line that Andrew pointed out i like also. Welcome to piptalk! Jessica |
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