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This Is Me |
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Lindsay Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 59South Dakota |
When did i change? When did i become what i am? When did my life become hell? I am not the person i use to be I use to have everything But i took it all for granted and lost it Now i'm alone and struggling Trying to get from one day to the next Fighting just to stay alive Don't want to go on like this any longer I want it all to go away Tired of putting on a front, tired of lies I just want to be happy agian |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I think that pretty much everyone has felt this way at one time or another. I know I have. There is a saying that goes, "What doesn't kill you will make you stronger," and that's what happens when you go through the hard stuff. I know it sounds cliche, but keep your chin up hon, and stay strong. You expressed your feelings really well in this poem. Keep writing--that helps a lot too! Hope you're doing better soon.   ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
i heard that!!!! |
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MiSsPoEticBaBi07 New Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 4 |
this is a really good poem .. you really expressed how you felt.. i write poety mysellf !! i love writtin . its who i am .. its a talent within.. heres a lil quote i made up.. ~"Poetry is a talent that comes within the heart but a song without music!"~ :: By: Me !!! Keep the good work up and keep writtin .. never stop.. |
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