how about those terrorists!

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duncan idaho
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since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

0 posted 2003-11-14 02:27 PM

Terrorist

Imagine somewhere
a boy cries.
in pain, and
frustration
Blood gushes from
his mouth in the form
of some vulgarity only
he understands
THe pain turns to
hatred
and a new generation of
bloodshed is formed.

monkey
Junior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 27

1 posted 2003-11-14 03:42 PM

very strong opinion there about a new generation of bloodshed forms!

dertah
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since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

2 posted 2003-11-15 12:06 PM

sweeeeeeeeeeet

EleanorMoonbaby
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since 2002-09-02

Posts 202
England, UK

3 posted 2003-11-17 09:57 AM

I liked this. It actually had something meaningful to say, as opposed to the "I got dumped, how tragic" I keep finding here. Nice imagery used. Thumbs up, etc.
Ellie

I am a firm believer in the authority of the ruling class. Especially since I rule.

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-01-20 11:11 PM

Hey, getting dimped is tragic!!! hehe. No, but really i like this poem. Very meaningful, and as much as i ---- to say, it is nice to see something, that is NOT about love, or as you so lightly say, "getting dumped" !!! hehe. lol. Awesome poem!
~kissa~

sweet_lost_palestinian1
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since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

5 posted 2004-01-20 11:40 PM

hello...as if u some know im a muslim\palestinian..u got to understand that people in the world all are different u cant be judging like iraq because saddam or osama bin laden soo..all im trying to say is WE ARE NOT ALL THE SAME..we are different generations and different people..may god bless u .

ascending_ecstasy
Member

since 2004-01-21

Posts 102

6 posted 2004-01-21 10:07 PM

It is good, I don't understand why lost palistinian thinks it is being directed towards muslims?? it's just expressing an emotion about terrorism.. thats all. I liked it, another of the best on this forum.

sweet_lost_palestinian1
Member

since 2004-01-08

Posts 90

7 posted 2004-01-21 11:39 PM

hello once again...im not saying im aganiest anything..dont be saying that please..im just trying to let u know NOT TO JUDGE..Be EQUAL....actuallly ur poem is so good...keep it up..

EverRuss
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 66
Indiana

8 posted 2004-01-22 07:00 PM

Great poem. Very visual. Just a comment, but i think everyone is being open and not judging and everything but its hard NOT to judge a terrorist.

If my poems could talk they would mean more than the words

Russell

Essential Distress
Junior Member

since 2004-01-22

Posts 33

9 posted 2004-01-22 07:15 PM

yeah. touchdown (hate to use an australian idol reference.. *shudders*)

anyways yeah top stuff. terrorism is getting everywhere... into the minds of everyone... even onto this forum, shock horror, but it has a place in the way that we express ourselves, better out than in...

muslimah
New Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 8

10 posted 2004-01-22 08:01 PM

as salaam alaikum,

(just dropping into the teen forums for a change of pace

)

firstly, i think this is a great poem, nicely written with a good message.
secondly, in defense of sweet lost palestinian, i too am muslim, though american. so much hate and anger are directed at us in general, in so many forms that it is hard not to get defensive when you see the word "terrorist". we, true muslims, are just the opposite, and the actions of a few cannot condemn an entire, wonderful religion. (which i think in a sense this poem conveys...)

anyway, great poem, i will be sure to read you in the future =)
wa salaam..

Toasty
Member

since 2003-06-09

Posts 74
my little hole in wisconsin

11 posted 2004-01-23 10:41 AM

wow... this really got to me. great description of emotion and hate and just...wow. I can't wait to read more of your work. This is going into my library.

~keep up the great work!

*toasty*

"Nothing is so strong as gentleness; Nothing so gentle as real strength." -Francis de Sales.

Michelle_loves_Mike

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since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

12 posted 2004-01-24 06:47 AM

as muslimah touches on,,,this poem was not a slap at muslims, palestiniens, smurfs, nor any race, creed, religion, etc.....
It was a well written piece, about how feelings can turn to rage and hate,
Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

13 posted 2004-01-24 06:02 PM

First off...

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Such a strong piece...so sad and so true...glad you've joined us!! I am looking forward to reading more from you!

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Standing on the edge of the world
Now I don’t want you to catch me
I want you to let me
Stand up here and walk on my own

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