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0 posted 2006-01-23 11:31 AM



Blue Sky
Corrupted with a yellow-grey cloud,
Nauseous
With the promise of rain.
A bright silhouette injecting itself
Into a terrible torrent of pain.
The deathly tinge,
The dark anon
Teardrops
Coated in hate.
The Once young ewe
Had possessed the chance
To change her twisted fate.
No matter.
For now
The day is dead.
The sun will never shine.
She had
Once been
That pure-white lamb
When she chose to stop
Time.

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1 posted 2006-01-23 12:02 PM



WELCOME to PiP !

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2 posted 2006-01-23 12:46 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!

This is a great work .I am really looking forward to seeing more of what you hvae for us.

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