Teen Poetry #7 |
Tainted |
tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Like a simple wave in the wind I'm fighting for something I can't have. Living for something that hurts and lies Living for something that won't last. Carry me across the threshold, I can't walk, I'm so tired of loving and loosing, The shards of what is left have cut my mind all because I wasn't the one worth choosing. Bring me back to what my life used to be, I'm o so great at pretending by now. I'll live on who I used to be, perfect, It's been so long, though, I've forgotten how. The happier times have come and gone, they used to be so many, now to so few, Burning desire to live past this world the desire to find someone who's true. My heart's decay has long lasted my minds life's harshness has left so many scars. Confined to fit a certain perception of the world when will i be free of the tainted bars. -Erin AIM-blueyed angel940 |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent writing. |
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to*sing*is*a*work*of*art New Member
since 2006-01-18
Posts 6 |
I really enjoyed reading your poem, it was interesting and eloquently written. Good job . |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
I feel the same way you do, or at least something close to. You put the emotion together so that most people can relate. This is something that you can be proud of. |
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