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xox.ice.cream.lover.xox
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since 2006-01-07
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Canada

0 posted 2006-01-07 03:36 PM


You took my heart
But never returned it
You tore it apart
And you don't care abit

You forgot about me
You've got someone else now
It's not like you care
But I do...somehow...

You have moved on
I guess I should too
But how can I
When all I think about is you?

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1 posted 2006-01-07 04:19 PM


WELCOME TO PIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



This is a great way to start your visit with us, and a very universal challenge eeryone deals with.


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piecesofapicture
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since 2006-01-02
Posts 4

2 posted 2006-01-07 05:08 PM


unfortunatly, i am going through exactly what you wrote about.
i liked the simplicity of it.
i know it's hard to put heart break into words.
i've tried.
failed.
but you did it well.

thanks for the read.<3

it's not about keeping your promises, it's about following your heart

tearsoflove13762
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since 2004-09-05
Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent
3 posted 2006-01-08 12:02 PM


this is a great first post! keep writing~
welcome to pip

how did you break my heart when it wasn't whole to start?

aol sn- tearsoflove13762

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