Teen Poetry #7 |
Get Over yourself |
littlelauren Junior Member
since 2005-12-30
Posts 25 |
Why are you so mean to me? I never done anything to you so why do you call me fat it affects me mentally It plays over and over in my head I pretend not to hear but the words cut into me like a knife so just leave me alone and let me live my life Everytime you say it I mentally gain apound soon I will lose it all who will you pick on now Everytime I eat something you make me feel guilty inside as if I don't disearve to eat I'm not more or less important than you so why do you repeat nasty things about me and make me feel worthless inside You are all just so pathetic trying to make yourselves feel good by making me miserable well guess what news flash I'm probably happier than you so why don't you just bugger off cause you're not worth another thought! You (edited by Moderator) are bullies which everyone can see but why don't you pick on them why do you only pick on me my friends stand up and tell you to stop but all you do is laugh and walk off you now only try and say stuff to me when I am all alone so abviously your scared of my friends is it only because you have none? So you are just jealous of all my friends well it's you I feel sorry for cause I have them You can rant and rave and call me names but Im still luckier than you because I have my mates! [This message has been edited by Ringo (01-07-2006 10:21 AM).] |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
interesting amount of pent up aggression in this one, but good point, screw materialistic people anyway... good write Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
this...reminds me of me. when i first started writting. i wrote how i felt...and thats good. but you can make it better with twist...or if you tell the story in a unigue and different way. because anyone can write a story...and even make some of it rhyme...but it takes a poet to make it something you will never forget. and it does take practice...and your doing good. I ask why, but in my mind, |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
i know exactly how u feel sadly... wish i could say youll get stronger... i hope u do but i just havent yet i decided to fix it myself |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
hun...I was in the same situation as you...I lost 55lbs and I feel great and you should see the looks on their faces when they saw me, all the guyz that used to pick on me suddenly were hitting on me...They are jealous of your happyness, no matter how much you weigh if you are happy some one will try to bring you down...dont let them. Keep writing...Keep strong |
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littlelauren Junior Member
since 2005-12-30
Posts 25 |
I just want everyine to know who reads this that I'm not fat!!! I keep getting this.. this isnt about me but about my best friends.. she sat and cried to me one night feeling so sad bacause of allthese girls being horrible... it really hurt me people were being like this to my amazingly gorgeous best friend.. we don't go to the same school so I can't be there for her so it's hard for me to see her this upset so I wrote it to get my feelings off my chest! thanks for your support towards her though! |
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XxnoraxX Member
since 2006-01-24
Posts 122<3 MA,,,USA <3 |
Aww..I hope those creeps will leave your friend alone. That poem rocks!!! I wish I could just print it and give a copy to everyone thats so stuck up. But, i know they'll prob just laugh anyways so great great great write! XxnoraxX |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
i've been where you are. Great poem Jessica |
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