I Don't Think That You Really Know

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Teen Poetry #7

I Don't Think That You Really Know

Olive_8
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 41
Canada

0 posted 2003-11-13 02:01 PM

I don't think that you really know
of the damage that's been done
You truly broke my heart this time
from the web of lies you've spun

I don't think that you really know
how much you need someone
Till the day they're gone from your life
and the the hurting has just begun

I don't think that you really know
how much I cared about you
Now it's too late for you to see
because you and I are through

I don't think that you really know
how much I'm hurting tonite
All I need is to hear your voice
to say that things are alright

I don't think that you really know
how much I loved being with you
I loved your arms around me
and I know that you loved it too

~*Everything will be ok in the end, and if it is not ok, then it is not the end.~*

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-11-13 03:53 PM

Great work! This was beautiful! ~Jess

"Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse

smiley
New Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 9

2 posted 2003-11-13 07:30 PM

wow great poem i can really relate to this. i wish too that everything could be ok. keep up the awesome work!

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

3 posted 2003-11-13 09:53 PM

it was ok, nothing strong in this one. nothing really stuck out to....it was an average poem.-alex

now im alone, but not lonely like before

xtel
Junior Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 16

4 posted 2003-11-14 12:04 PM

I liked your poem. Somehow i can relate to it.
Good work!

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

5 posted 2003-11-14 11:27 AM

dammit....who are you? tell me...ahhhhhhh

good write by the way this is a fav

Olive_8
Junior Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 41
Canada

6 posted 2003-11-15 11:18 AM

Hey guys thanks for your inputs, i will try to use them to make myself a better writer!!

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